November 11 A Short Poem Of Partying
I meant. to say. parting. You forgot to take my narrow shoulders and the red handkercheif that flowers from behind the right blade, a conjuration of love- making, gone, let alone the moon; a complete...
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So touching, Alison. I love the note in the tea canister and "You forgot to take my narrow shoulders and the red handkercheif that flowers from behind the right blade"
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Really good one. I love all the details. Sad and sweet. So effective.
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Damn! I was so looking forward to your poem about "partying" since that is not a way I think of you. But the flip to parting is so effective, so unexpected, it works like the shock of actual parting....
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WHAT GRETA SAID!!! Damn! I was so looking forward to your poem about "partying" since that is not a way I think of you. But the flip to parting is so effective, so unexpected, it works like the shock...
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Yep, me too. Nice flip. This too: i love you on the back of a cheap receipt, in ballpoint pen, hurriedly roped with a heart
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